tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post6187191885281360715..comments2023-03-15T09:36:59.191-04:00Comments on Montserrat Illustration Senior Thesis: sketches and things!montserrathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10069418669170022962noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post-18836246133187332062010-11-04T09:20:32.649-04:002010-11-04T09:20:32.649-04:00i'll save most of my comments for clss, as i a...i'll save most of my comments for clss, as i am mostly undecided which one would be best. i do think the head in the ground one is a bit of a strecth for the audience to understand why. i like it as a visual, but i miss the connection to the story.Mark Hoffmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15587540504663012582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post-45057644352839373762010-11-02T19:17:35.335-04:002010-11-02T19:17:35.335-04:00I am really drawn to the idea of his head in the g...I am really drawn to the idea of his head in the ground, mostly because it's playing with the character a little bit, giving him some action. Maybe you can play with some boarders around his head. Also to be repetitive, I want like millions of flowers around his head in the ground. But not all in detail, some just shapes of flowers in the background<br /><br />Only suggestions though :)Erin Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06990189556067598027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post-23326222781045136712010-11-02T10:32:32.699-04:002010-11-02T10:32:32.699-04:00I like how your changing it up a bit with this one...I like how your changing it up a bit with this one. I'm most drawn to the last one because I like the quiet composition and the design element of the border as well as its shape, it really fits the cultural theme. The only thing I noticed was I don't like how the left side plant curls and meets up with the line of his collar, I would just shift it a bit. I also am drawn to the top left one with him sitting with his back to the viewer and the eye up above, I like the mood and its kinda creepy, but I think you can get really expressive when you paint that one. :)Paul T Demakeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09119500923424396197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post-84344244429856826042010-11-01T23:46:10.023-04:002010-11-01T23:46:10.023-04:00I really like the frame on the first sketch, but t...I really like the frame on the first sketch, but the image is a little stagnant. I like how the composition is arranged in the top-right sketch in the second image. Any ideas about combining the two?Emily Blank Winnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15644711598750620701noreply@blogger.com