tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post9076721719287933994..comments2023-03-15T09:36:59.191-04:00Comments on Montserrat Illustration Senior Thesis: Twin girl Spiritsmontserrathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10069418669170022962noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post-87015829688805903852010-10-07T15:35:47.001-04:002010-10-07T15:35:47.001-04:00I like everything except for the feet. They're...I like everything except for the feet. They're too choppy for my taste. Maybe making the blue cuts more random would fix this?N-Deshlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01095586612677746520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post-64288970750000228182010-10-04T10:35:36.920-04:002010-10-04T10:35:36.920-04:00erin-
i like this better than the original sketch ...erin-<br />i like this better than the original sketch you sent me.<br />think about ways to bring more black into the base of the image. the fact that it is only in the sky bothers me.<br />i think the fading of their legs could be worked on. it just looks like you erased their leg lines.<br />i like what "RIN" said concerning turning their bodys to face away. the look over the shoulder is much more exciting. and makes me wonder where they are going.Mark Hoffmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15587540504663012582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post-7098898734845405552010-10-03T18:39:50.099-04:002010-10-03T18:39:50.099-04:00(my dumb picture code didnt work, posting again)
...(my dumb picture code didnt work, posting again)<br /><br />hmm i like this! the only thing that bugs me, and this might just be me, but i get the feeling with their posture that they SHOULD be turned in the other direction (ie, their backs towards us) i think it might be how their bodys bow outwards instead of inwards.<br /><br />heres a picture i edited to show you what i mean http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v245/Andoledius/?action=view&current=1-2.jpg<br /><br />im not saying you should change the direction their facing in, but maybe raise the posture more or lean them slightly inward so it doesnt get too confusing c: otherwise great concept, i like were you went with it =DRinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10171974709865782037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2788517246078990185.post-35968791461941119832010-10-03T18:39:00.535-04:002010-10-03T18:39:00.535-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Rinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10171974709865782037noreply@blogger.com