Tuesday, September 22, 2009

Comic Panels: Chris Thibodeau

sailor man

First 4 panels for my comic book.

2 comments:

  1. i am digging the color palette and off registration of the piece. make sure you don't lose too much detail in the scale chosen. specifically panel one. the fourth is great.
    -mark

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  2. I feel like the fourth panel could be reversed. The way that the third panel sets the next one up, it feels like the drink is speeding away from the old man, rather than towards him. It might just be a balance issue, the man's hand is pointing mostly to the right, and the drink is strongly moving to the right as well.

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