I drew up another sketch. i know you guys like the other one but i could not get rid of the "totem poll" symmetry and keep the same composition, so i drew this =) not as "romantic" as the other ones, still keeping his chest open, and i shortened the canvas.
These two are just tonal studies, one where she has pointed fingers and the other with normal. i am a little concerned with the ribs not being shaped all the way around, but i do enjoy the "zipper" affect it creates. tell me what you think =)
Did some revisions, slightly different positioning of the two:
This version is the newest one, where i added the fly whisk that supposedly wards off evil spirits, wasnt sure if i should add another element besides the two people.
Hmmm, I think I like the second to the top one the best! It shows off the elements of the piece in a nice balanced way (Although I wish her arm behind his head was darker like in the top one).
ReplyDeleteHis heart glowing is my favorite part :3
I have to agree with Erin. I like the look of the wispy smoke flowing all around in the head and background. Keep the glowing heart too! Can't wait to see the finished.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the above two comments, but the third one (without the wisk) I think I like a little more. I really like the movement in the smoke behind them, and I think the wisk halts it.
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