Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Update on mermaid

EDIT; This post has a revised version of the illustration now


  1. erin-
    his eye is getting lost in the shadow. find a way to add more contrast to it. the girl's eye stands out because the line work doesn't have to compete with the shadows (there are none). this doesn't mean the shadow shouldn't be in his eyes but there has to be somealternative contrast effect you can give it.
    are you dropping the idea of the fish being a shade lighter thna the ladies hair?

  2. Mark-
    Actually I forgot about the fish while working on it before, so thank you for reminding me. And hopefully I added enough contrast to the man's eye so it pops out better now